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Topic: Arisa Uotani(Uo-chan) (Read 76 times)

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Re: Arisa Uotani(Uo-chan)
« Thread Started on Jul 21, 2006, 4:02pm »

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First of all- You need better grammer and spelling
Secodn- I really didn't get the "Uo" part of the sotry. I want the sample to have more Uo in it
Third of all- I really didn
t get the character's personality! And I think isn't soemthign oyu hsould say. Either be sure about it, or not put it there.
Fourth-- 10-15 lines is every row, not every sentance, every row. So you only have 6 lines. But I said at leats 10-15 lines :/

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